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Tuesday
Jan 24, 2006

Re: In A World -- Thoughts on the Process posted by Martin

Idea length: I agree with you that longer is not necessarily better, but it sure is clearer. I think that, despite the strength of our ideas, what the other person is really reacting to is their own interpretation of the idea. I would guess that we’re going to encounter situations where your understanding of my ideas is much different than my original concept, and vice-versa. So, the process becomes one of re-pitching the idea—which might speak to the gap in some of the stories between your ranking and mine. Which leads me to:

The Scabs: I’ll defend this one more later, but I loved the encapsulation of class issues recast as android-human issues, starring the robots as the socialists and the humans as the capitalists. That’s just damn brilliant. It answers the age-old-question: how can you talk about political issues without activating political triggers?

Rachel My Dear: This one was a bit of a wild card, I’ll confess, but it’s a psychological thriller that would make Fincher wring his hands. I definitely see something there, that I’ll hopefully elucidate well when it goes up against Methane Madness (which, I’m not all that excited about. I’m gonna fight hard…).

Music: Out of your music, I knew: the Burrito’s song, Galaxie 500, and (surprise surprise) Stevie & Tom. I’m gonna make some links to all these songs in iTunes later, so we can all hear them, especially the ones we don’t know. I feel like I totally scored with my iTunes picks—they were all interesting, and with the exception of Black Little Stray (which is more evocative and less definitive in message) and Because, I had no trouble coming up with stories from the music. Even when Roky threw me a loop, when I thought the line “Will he leave Moscow?” was “Will he eat my scalp?” but then that was just a shoe-in for sci-fi, eh? The interpreter is gonna eat your scalp? That’s a motherfucking BADASS interpreter. He rules whatever he interprets. Thus Rasputin….

As for The Angry Youth: you know, that vaguely rings a bell, but I can’t say it’s more than that. I’ll stick with Poochie!

And the playoffs: I’m glad we’re starting out with a tough match. I think it will make the whole process more interesting. In the spirit of this, I think we should allow a rule: after the initial defense of the stories, we should be allowed to add detail to them. So, we start out arguing the germ of an idea, but if no clear winner emerges we can offer bargaining chips, such as “What if Poochie! was voiced by Homer?” (which reminds me, if you Google “homer voice”, Google is smart enough to say “See reults for Dan Castelleneta”), then we can avoid stalemates, and enhance the stories at the same time. Whattya think?

Personally, I’m ready. Let the games of Spitball! begin!

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What is Spitball!?

Spitball! is two guys collaborating to write about writing and collaboration. We're writing partners who have worked together since 2000, and placed in the top 100 in the last Project Greenlight for our script YELLOW.

Currently, we are both working on multiple screenplay, short story, and novel ideas independently and together, and collaborate on this blog.

What Spitball! used to be

Spitball! started as an attempt to collaborate on a screenplay online in real time. From January 2006 to July 2007 we worked on an interactive process to decide the story we were going to make. A full postmortem is coming, but you can find the find all the posts by looking in the category Original Version.

During this period, we affected the personalities of two of the most famous spitball pitchers from the early 20th Century. Look at our brief bios for more info about this, and so as not to be confused as to who is talking when.

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Kent M. Beeson (aka Urban Shockah) is a stay-at-home dad and stay-at-home writer, living in Seattle, WA with his wife, 2 year old daughter and an insane cat. In 2007, he was a contributor to the film blog ScreenGrab, where he presciently suggested Jackie Earle Haley to play Rorschach in the Watchmen movie, and in 2008, he wrote a film column for the comic-book site ComiXology called The Watchman. (He's a big fan of the book, if you couldn't tell.) In 2009, he gave up the thrill of freelance writing to focus on screenplays and novels, although he sometimes posts to his blog This Can't End Well, which a continuation of his first blog, he loved him some movies. He's a Pisces, and his favorite movie of all time is Jaws. Coincidence? I think not.

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