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Monday
Jan 23, 2006

Reading List: The Real Prison Planet posted by Martin

We make jokes of the ethical and philosophical implications of a prison planet, but this today on Morning Edition I heard Renee Montagne interview author John Tayman (audio of program available at link) about his book “The Colony” in which he describes the real history of lepers on the Hawaiian Islands, and how they were banished to Molokai during the 19th Century.

It also raises the issues of plot that I hadn’t thought about: in this case, lepers who wanted to avoid banishment would act out, murdering doctors, or hiding somehow. If they were caught, they were sent to Molokai where they were banished on a volcanic beach with a hoe and told to make a life of it. This makes me think of our screenplay with a more human aspect—plot ideas about the person being banished, and the fear that this must strike. We are, after all, social animals. What’s a stronger punishment than banishment? Isn’t that essentially what prison’s are?

For these new arrivals on leper Molokai, previous colonists would often work to scare and intimidate them. The buying and trading of women and children were common. Interestingly, though, the colony grew into a very tight cooperative community, and when it was broken up, some chose to stay behind and continue to live there.

I’m putting this one on my reading list—it will likely be most informative to our cause. Depending, of course, on what plot we decide.

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